Fighting Art

My poem

Johnny B Bad (4)

26.6.2023 12:10

Ancient times - Rome, Greece.
2 men of different tribe
fought hand to hand
Push and resist
Push and give way
An epic battle dance

In a sudden Momentum
meeting the ground
Body and body
Neck and neck
Lips and lips
Points of still exhaustions
Sensing balance in opposition
Bodies are one
Fast roll and slow
Shifting of power
Body to earth
Breath sweat and dirt
Spinning and holding
Held tight
Human corkscrew
Captured and bound in limbs
Drawing strength of body and organs
Muscle and sinew
Summon of inner fury
Escape is just one chance
Indefeatable strength
The table is flipped upside down
Burning passion
And taste of flesh
Neck to neck
Lips meet lips
In joint surrender

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AussieBoxer (44 )

27.6.2023 8:44

Not bad at all mate. The poem's pretty good too.

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Cymrofight (60)

15.2.2024 10:29

Love the itemising of the features of a grapple and the current travelling under it that results in the lips seeking each other out. And the joy of that particular joint surrender.

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